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I think your story is amazing

As said. It is a realistic well built and paced Dom & Sub story. I hope it will remain so

Its my fantasy complete

I would give 5 stars and the only reason it's at 4 has nothing to do with author or story but just that if a lady is requiring a condom to fuck her .. use one. If it breaks use another we all agate to use them compared to bareback but I know if rules from the lady were followed there would be more ladies there and honestly I've never been in a booth or theater. Lol. Ill be calling for a Uber next time I'm there..

Another excellent, well written story from Don Jetman!

Excellent, well written story. Glad to see a new author! If you're worried about a story being too long feel free to use the chapters option. Imo, there's no such thing as 'too long' when it comes to storytelling

Very Thanks for writing this its super hot can't wait for next part.

I would love to send my wife for massage there!

With its pros and cons I really like it as a dream scenario!

As always, good stuff from Stormbringer.

great story . just thought the latino landlord should have eaten her out at least.

Good writing and build up of the story. Really hot!

Love it

Great story and characters. Look forward to more.

Hope to read more.

Ready to send her out camping with me for a weekend?

Testing this review system to see where these comments end up.

One of the first stories I ever read and still one of the best. If you haven't read JetLag's stories yet, do yourself a favor and get started now.