I think you mean 'asses' and 'assholes'. How can you be interested in writing but care nothing about basic spelling or grammar? That's like being interested in fishing, but not unwilling to get near water! Good luck with the writing career though. Please take this as positive and...
Well, I didn't read past the first line because it really should read: "How could this HAVE happened?" rather than: "OF happened". So . . . I figured it would be too painful to have to wade through your poor grammar skills. You wanted feedback . . . how's that?