...could do with employing someone to assist with the domestic tasks around the place.Jamie agreed.Mother knew of someone who would fit the bill.*******Jamie had been both bemused and intrigued by Brigit ever since it had been suggested by his mother that assistance was needed in the...
...the routine of locking up and turning off the lights.The two black guys were already waiting outside when he followed her out of the door. They smirked at him; Joel nodded back and felt his cock swell even more in his pants as he envisaged what the rest of the evening was going to bring...
Understood, it can be very frustrating.Actually I tried to write you a longer note but the restriction on number of characters stopped me from doing so. If you want to have a serious conversation about this then write to me at 'curtbruch662@gmail.com'BW - Curt
Welcome to DW, 3 great well-crafted stories but, you need to work on your paragraphing.A block of text unfortunately loses impact and intention especially when dealing with dialogue. Create a line break (aka - new paragraph) whenever the 'speaker' changes. Just sayin'!Best wishes - Curt (aka...
...God, is that the time? I've gotta run."I didn't ask why the rush but said something like that I also 'had things to do' and with that we parted.******I felt a lot more comfortable after that meeting with Cathy and prided myself on having become a 'good little *****' who attracted a...
Thanks for the follow, I appreciate it having always given your own posts the closest of attention over the years. Hopefully this follow extends to Darkwanderer where I do most of 'my work'. Best wishes - Curt
I quite agree; noting more daunting when opening a story to find a mass of text with no breaks to allow one to take a breath! Paragraphs are the answer.For example, when writing dialogue between two or more persons I always hit 'enter' to emphasize the change of focus when one person answers...
Fred (and anyone else who may be interested) I have already copied down and am compiling these stirring tales into one complete collection which I will publish just as soon as the wrinkles are ironed out. Happy New Year everyone!
Um,Kraftty, haven't you noticed that Subguy's last post was dated over 5 years ago. I think you're going to have to accept there ain't going to be any more!
Don't wish to rain on your parade but do you think you might check your spelling before posting. You really have been coming over as some comedy double act. Just sayin'.
...Funny old thing, we don't need it after she comes home Friday nights which is also one of the reasons she (and I) look forward to that time.*******New Years Eve was nice this year. Our son spent the night at a friend’s party and our daughter stayed up with us and watched the ball-drop...
Good to hear it Steve and to know that your story after going through all the emotional twists and turns has a Happy Ending in sight. I shall look forward to the New Year and reading about your reconnection and plans.(For those who may be new to the site or perhaps have not been paying...
Well put Steve. You have no need to justify or explain to anyone what you have been doing or rationalize on how you have arrived in the place you now happily sit especially not to the pseudo-psychoanalysts who have taken on the mantle of being experts in the field without providing any evidence...