Just for fun I took your story and added to it, heating it up and also changing some of the text so that her clothing matches the story in the second photo. I would like to send you the story for comments. No, don't worry, I have not put the story anywhere claiming it to be by me. I do this with a writer from England and we have a lot of fun with it. I see some red links down there where it says send e mail and also send private message so I will see if I can contact you.